Hey Louis, I really like the red and grey one. The distribution of values is pretty good with the small amount of white in there and the overall design is well balanced. Some of them could use a bit more work to either simplify the shapes more or inversely add more points of interest. Its kinda hard for me to point out which one needs what because you didn't number them and you changed their position on every image. All the presentation stuff that we talked about in the first week still applies to every piece you're producing. Even if you render out straight out of 3DCoat or youre taking screenshots, you should spend some extra time to present your stuff properly.
Hey Louis,
ReplyDeleteI really like the red and grey one. The distribution of values is pretty good with the small amount of white in there and the overall design is well balanced. Some of them could use a bit more work to either simplify the shapes more or inversely add more points of interest. Its kinda hard for me to point out which one needs what because you didn't number them and you changed their position on every image. All the presentation stuff that we talked about in the first week still applies to every piece you're producing. Even if you render out straight out of 3DCoat or youre taking screenshots, you should spend some extra time to present your stuff properly.
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1G-1arYNFM_mSXjOesDddqA8xsTWIgwqY
Cheers!